still needs work
This had some good elements, but is mainly too repetitive. The percussion was at times overbearing; trance should be rhythmic and driving, but shouldn't rely too much on percussion. Keep working on it, though; I think you've got something good to show us.
Very mellow! Kind of reminds me of a jam session.
thanks, and it's kind of funny...it started out as a kind of jam session. i was just jamming on some chords and that song came into my head...and i decided to record it. so im glad you like it!
ps. it would be longer but i still use zip disks for recording and i had like 3 or 4 other songs on with it.
It's simple and repetitive, but the rhythm and atmospherics are strong. If I had to make a suggestion, it would be try switching it up with another chord progression.
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